When we watch the movie of Little Mermaid, we're attracted by the romance. When we read The Old man and the sea, we admired the wisdom of facing uncontrol. And when we eat sushi and every fish dishes, we enjoy the taste. However, to most of poeple, it's easily to ignore that the sea is encountering huge danger. Pullution from digging of oil and inflowing from the land, climate change which has the temperture become higher year by year, and intemperate fishing are the main cause of the damage. Shallow sea area like intertidal zone reduced to the first line of the dramatical perish, with lot of coral reef dying and birds and turtles lost their homes.
To address the peril the sea faces and secure a better future for humanity, I propose an innovative app concept that revolves around the theme of "everyone can help." The app incorporates the following features:
Information: Unveiling the Reality Many people are unaware of the severity of ocean and shore pollution. Acknowledging this harsh reality is the first step toward change. The app will visually depict garbage distribution and maps showcasing the devastation of coral reefs, enabling users to comprehend the situation easily.
Action: Making Change Happen As the saying goes, actions speak louder than words. Without practical efforts, nothing will change. Even if we are not wealthy, we can contribute by taking simple steps, such as participating in beach cleanups. The app will display the locations of cleaning activities, allowing users to record their participation and earn rewards, creating a game-like incentive that encourages more people to join.
Knowledge: Constructing Common Sense My concern extends beyond the sea to the broader ecology, the foundation of human existence. With only one Earth, it is time to stop robbing our descendants and all nature creatures of their future. The app will provide the latest news on topics such as SDGs and net zero, establishing an eco-friendly learning platform.
This app concept represents a hopeful vision where the power of AI technology contributes to positive changes in our world. Achieving a sustainable planet requires everyone's collective effort to turn this vision into reality.
- captivated (著迷): 對於吸引的選擇,我希望用一個強烈的形容詞,以突顯電影和文學作品對於海洋所產生的深刻吸引力。
- uncontrollable forces (難以控制的力量): 這個詞組用來形容海洋面臨的不可控制的外在力量,強調了問題的嚴重性和難以應對的性質。
- indulge (沉溺): 選擇這個字詞是為了強調人們對於享受海鮮美食的習慣,與前文提到的文學和電影形成對比。
- intertidal zones (潮間帶): 使用這個術語是為了更精確地描述潮水漲落時露出水面的區域。
- witnessing (目擊): 這個字詞強調觀察和目睹的意味,用來描述作者在過去三個月中對海洋問題的親身體驗。
- address (應對): 這個字詞被選用來表達對問題的處理和應對,強調了需要採取積極行動的呼籲。
- peril (危險): 用這個字詞強調了海洋所面臨的危機和危險,強調問題的嚴重性。
- revolves (圍繞): 使用這個字詞表示某事的核心或關鍵,表達了整個文章圍繞著保護海洋的主題。
- incorporates (結合): 選擇這個字詞以強調APP概念中結合(incorporate)不同功能的特性。
- severity (嚴重性): 這個字詞用來強調海洋問題的嚴重性和深遠影響。
- depict (描述): 用這個字詞表示對現況的描述,傳達作者試圖以生動的語言呈現問題的實際樣貌。
- incentive (激勵): 使用這個字詞強調需要激勵或動力,表達了鼓勵更多人參與保護海洋的呼籲。
- My concern extends beyond the sea to the broader ecology (我的關切超越了海洋,延伸至更廣泛的生態系統): 這個句子用來表達作者的擔憂不僅僅限於海洋,還延伸到更廣泛的生態系統,以強調保護整個生態的重要性。
- collective effort (集體努力): 這個詞組用來強調需要集體努力,突顯保護海洋是一個共同的義務。
- "When we watch the movie 'The Little Mermaid,' we are captivated by the romance it portrays."
- 文法結構: 使用 "captivated by" 這個短語,強調了對於電影所呈現的浪漫情感的深深吸引。
- 例句: "When we [觀看某事], we are captivated by [所呈現的情感或特點]."
"Even when we indulge in sushi and various fish dishes, we savor the delightful taste of the sea."
- 文法結構: 使用 "indulge in" 表達對於享受壽司和各種魚料理的沉迷。
- 例句: "Even when we [沉迷於某事], we savor the delightful taste of [所沉迷的事物]."
"Without practical efforts, nothing will change."
- 文法結構: 強調了實際行動的重要性,使用 "Without...nothing will..." 的結構。
- 例句: "Without [某種條件], nothing will [發生某事]."
"The app will visually depict garbage distribution and maps showcasing the devastation of coral reefs, enabling users to comprehend the situation easily."
- 文法結構: 使用 "will" 表達未來,結合 "visually depict" 這個短語,使表達更具體。
- 例句: "The [工具/系統] will visually depict [某事的分佈或情況], enabling [使用者/觀眾] to comprehend the situation easily."
"The app incorporates the following features:"
- 文法結構: 使用 "incorporates" 引入APP的特點,使句子更清晰。
- 例句: "The [工具/系統] incorporates [某些特點]."
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